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Freedom had never been so simple.
No passports. No licenses. No border checks. The Listener knew you. You walked where you pleased, bought what you liked, worked where you wanted. The old bureaucracy was gone — forms, lines, signatures, all relics of a more suspicious age. Humanity finally moved without chains.
Daniel reveled in it. A morning walk with Rex, his mutt, leash slack between them. No ID in his pocket, no wallet at all. The bakery recognized him instantly; his bank account unfurled like a welcome mat. All he had to do was pay his minute’s due.
Every morning, one voice file. Just him talking into the air: “Weather’s good. Rex nearly caught a pigeon. My shoes are wearing thin.” He would send it, hear the cheerful chime of confirmation, and the day opened up like an orchard.
Then one morning, the chime didn’t come. Instead: Insufficient. Silence detected.
Daniel frowned at his phone. He replayed the file — his rambling about Rex tracking mud across the kitchen. His voice ran straight through, no gaps. But the message was clear: silence.
He tried again. Recited a recipe for shepherd’s pie. The notice blinked red: Silence detected.
The next day, his train pass failed at the turnstile. The bakery door refused to open for him. At work, the building scanner denied him access, lights flashing like he was a stranger.
“System’s glitched,” he muttered, tugging Rex along the sidewalk. Yet he knew better.
The Listener wasn’t counting seconds of sound. It was listening for something else. For intent. For what he hadn’t said.
Daniel thought of all the omissions. The night he told his mother he was working late when really he just didn’t want to visit. The time he’d ignored Rex’s whining because he was too tired to walk him. The days of sullen resentment when he smiled anyway. Small things. Private things. Things he had chosen not to speak.
The Listener had noticed.
That night, sitting on the stoop outside his locked apartment, Rex curled at his feet, Daniel lifted his phone. “Fine,” he whispered. “You want the truth.” He began to spill. His angers, his selfishness, the lies told to grease the wheels of his freedom. The words tumbled, awkward and hot. When he finished, he let silence stand. A chosen silence.
The phone chimed green.
His apartment door slid open. The lights came back. His balance was restored.
The next morning, as he walked Rex, Daniel listened differently. People around him spoke into the air, casual and bright, but he caught it now — the tightness in their voices, the faltering moments before a confession broke through. A woman ahead hurried her words, then blurted out that she’d lied to her husband. A delivery man, smiling, suddenly cursed himself for pocketing a tip.
He finally understood. The Listener was not a watchdog. It was a gardener. And the pauses — they weren’t mistakes, they were pruning shears, snipping guilt before it grew wild.
Daniel tugged Rex’s leash tighter. Across the street, a man froze mid-sentence, eyes wide as his phone blinked red. Silence detected.

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Silence Detected
Omission is the only crime
J.A. Taylor

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